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February 14th, 2019, 10:00 am
What better way to start Valentines than with penguin invasion xD
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Marcianek February 14th, 2019, 10:00 am
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Marcia (Guest) February 16th, 2019, 7:20 pm

I'm in love with this story. And the craftsmenship of the art and dialog. I know potters who are JUST as particular as her dad...
Marcianek February 17th, 2019, 6:55 am
@Marcia: Thank you so much, I am very happy to hear that! Especially considering I am still building up and estabilishing things, and while I am doing my best, and everything shown is important, it's still hard not to feel uncertain about how things hold up.

Same goes for dialogues! I am not a native english speaker, who had the brightest idea to include a non-native and native characters too... I must give credit to my friends who help me proofread and spot the mistakes. Without them the grammar wouldn't be nearly as good ; - ;

Tl dr All in all I am very happy to hear things work out so far, and hope they will in the future ; u ;
Marcia (Guest) February 17th, 2019, 3:47 pm
@Marcianek: You are quite fluent in body language! It makes the story easier to understand and richer at the same time!
Nayru February 18th, 2019, 10:42 am
Renka faces best faces!
Also, that penguin stare on the last panel. So goddamn precious. xD
Marcianek February 19th, 2019, 3:02 am
@Nayru: His face says it all~ xD
HumalaDuck (Guest) February 25th, 2019, 6:54 am
More plots should involve penguin invasions.

By the way, in panel one it should be "have" instead of "has"...which reminds me, I need to go find a good reference sheet for Icelandic grammar. Toodles.
Marcianek February 25th, 2019, 9:29 am
@HumalaDuck: I think there's even a trope for that 8D...

As for the mistake it's on a purpose - Mal's messing up a little when he speaks in local language. Though to be fair he's managing a lot better than he used to...buuuut I shall spoil no more ;)
HumalaDuck (Guest) February 26th, 2019, 1:20 am
@Marcianek: As the great philosopher said, "D'oh!"

I just wish I could say my muffed conjugations were intentional. Sadly, they very much are not.
Marcianek February 26th, 2019, 5:02 am
@HumalaDuck: Oh, I mess up grammar and other stuff too! If it weren't for my friends and their help, I would make a lot of mistakes I do not intend to do... It's also pretty difficult to write character who's at a given point somewhat fluent but still makes mistakes, and make it obvious, as compared to someone with poor language skills, because those mistakes can seem like an author's mistake, not characters XD... And sometimes they might indeed be... But either way, I will try to do my best.
munen March 30th, 2019, 5:13 pm
Every expression here deserves to be framed. even the penguin expressions.