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December 6th, 2018, 10:00 am
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Marcianek December 3rd, 2018, 9:02 pm
And the prize for the most beaming smile goes to...

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solfi (Guest) December 7th, 2018, 8:54 am
I still can't get over how your cross-hatching and backgrounds remind me so much of Samura. Not a single line is wasted or misplaced, the texture is just perfect. T_T And I love the lower middle panel, with Mal looking smaller and kinda humbled by Nadi's enthusiasm. Like he's trying to make his case in the most subtle way possible. I would say this is one of my favorite pages but frankly I could say that of almost every page xD
Marcianek December 7th, 2018, 3:40 pm
@solfi: awhdajwhda Thank you! hah, it was one of my faves to draw (though mostly bc the bg was mercifull on me XD). And I am very happy about the way you see it. He indeed doesn't want to take away from her joy, even though he's propably fearing about her on a daily basis. But let's not get too far ahead :)
munen December 7th, 2018, 4:32 pm
I absolutely love the panel where she's changing. Her pose is perfect.
Marcianek December 7th, 2018, 7:25 pm
@munen: I'm glad it works :D
ElisaMelis December 20th, 2018, 10:21 am
I second Solfi comment, I am afraid to repeat myself but I adore every page so much! Also, the story and the characters feel so real, I love them already!
Marcianek December 25th, 2018, 3:41 am
@ElisaMelis: You have no idea how happy this makes me. Not only about the drawing, but the characters too. I myself have a ton of doubts and "buts" about these first pages, and always question myself about the first impressions, how I could do things differently to contain what i want to say better or that maybe I could convey something differently... but I also don't want to be impatient with my storytelling and...yeah. I am definitely a person who wants to convey a ton but needs time... It's very reassuring to read comments such as yours ; A ;